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WRITING

一、立场观点型

黄金模板1(适合Yes/ No题型)

It has long been a contentious issue as to whether 题目陈述. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2 . As far as I am concerned, the former/ latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, 支持观点1/2 的理由1. 阐释理由1. For another, 支持观点1/2 的理由2. 阐释理由2. Now, after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that 总结观点 . Therefore, as a university student, we should 提出建议.

(97年真题) More Pressure from Academic Studies Does Good to Us

It has long been a contentious issue as to whether more pressure from academic studies does good to students or not. Some people are of the opinion that pressure makes motive power, while others point out that too much pressure problems. As far as I am concerned, the former opinion holds more weight.

For one thing, pressure from academic studies can drive students to work harder. Our college education serves as a preparation phase for future career development. In order to stand out among many competitors, students should learn as much as possible in the college and make themselves to be more prepared for the future jobs.

For another, pressure from the academic study is a necessary driving force to those less self-disciplined students. College life leaves, compared to the new life style and become addicted to playing computer games or surfing the Internet all day long.

Now, after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that modest pressure from academic study is useful and necessary. Therefore, as a university student, we should treasure our college life and properly arrange our time. “Play while play, study while study”, as the saying goes.

黄金模板2(适合A/ B题型) The argument over A or B has recently been brought into focus. Quite a few deem that 支持A 的观点, but others, in contrast, take B as the premier choice. Personally, 论点. The main reason for my inclination for A is that.支持论点的理由1. If用假设的例子证明理由1. Furthermore, 支持论点的理由2. 证明理由2.

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Among all of the supporting evidences, the strongest one is支持论点的理由3. 证明理由3. The B way of thinking is too limited. 阐述B的局限性. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心 , because 总结理由1,2,3. (06年真题) Saving Money or Using Tomorrow’s Money

The argument over saving money or using tomorrow’s money among students has recently been brought into focus with the results of a survey released recently. Quite a few deem that saving money is a good habit, but others, in contrast, take using tomorrow’s money today as the premier choice. Personally, I think thrift should never be abandoned, especially by our students.

The main reasion for my inclination for saving money is that thrift is a traditional virtue in China. Our country is still a developing country, and is also a country with a too large population. If we have used up all of tomorrow’s money, then how should we do tomorrow?

Furthermore, thrift is a vurtue that young students should hold. Knowing hwo to spend money today doesn’t mean knowing how to earn money tomorrow. It is dangerous when we spend more than we can earn.

Among all of the supporting evidences, the strongest one is “Don’t count your chickens before they are hatched.” Future is too uncertain. We have to save something in case of the rainy days.

The using-tomorrow-money way of thinking is too limited. As a college student, I am supposed to hold the good habit of saving money, because it is not only a virtue, but also a kind of attitude toward life.

黄金模板3(适合A/ B题型)

通过现象引出话题. As a result, some people are worried that A与B之间的矛盾. however, I don’t think their concerns are necessary, because A has some exclusive advantages over B. First of all, A与B比较优势1. A 的优点. However, B 的缺点. Furthermore, A与B比较优势2. For example, 举例说明优势2. Last but not the least, A与B比较优势3. A 的优点. In contrast, B 的缺点. In short, A has some merits that B doesn’t have. Therefore, 结论.

(04年真题) Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?

Nowadays, phones seem to be a favorite choice of communication among people, especially young people. As a result, some people are worried that phones will kill letter writing. However, I don’t think their concerns are necessary, because letter writing has some exclusive advantages over phones.

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First of all, writing letters costs much less than making a phone call. To write a letter, you just need a piece of paper, a pen, an envelop and a stamp, which all together costs no more than 1 Yuan. However, to make a phone call, you have to have a phone first and pay for every minute after.

Furthermore, under some important circumstances, letters are more appropriate and feasible than phone call. For example, if you want to invite a good friend to attend your wedding ceremony, it’s better to send him a letter of invitation than just to phone him.

Last but not the least, letters are often written in a more logical and organized way. During the course of writing letters, you weigh your words more carefully. In contrast, during a phone conversation, you speak out of your ideas without deep thought.

In short, letter writing has some merits that phones don’t have. Therefore, I don’t think phones will kill letter writing.

二、比较对比型

黄金模板1(适合Advantages/ Disadvantages题型)

People’s views towards the advantages and disadvantages of 主题词 vary greatly. Some believe (hold, think) that 观点1, while others argue (maintain, support) that观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea because its advantages outweigh its diasadvantages. There are dozens of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 支持论点的理由1. 证明理由1. The second reason that can be seen by every person is that支持论点的理由2. For example, 举例证明理由2. From the above, we can easily see that 主题词is beneficial to 总结理由1,2.

(99年真题) A Major Advantage of Advertising on Television

People’s views towards the advantages and disadvantages of the television advertisement vary greatly. Some believe that TV advertising brings us benefits, while others argue that advertising is full of false and misleading information. As for me, I agree with the former idea because its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

There are dozens of reasons behind my belief. First of all, TV advertising is a good means for manufacturers to publicize their products. Through advertising on TV, every company tries its best to display the merits of its products and convince consumers that its product is reliable and credible. In the market-oriented economy, TV advertising is probably the best way for company to win in the keen competitions.

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The second reason that can be seen by every person is that consumers need TV advertising for their reference. Through TV advertising, consumers can get the first-hand information about new products, so that they can choose the most suitable one. For example, before buying a cell phone, they just need to turn on the television, sit in the sofa, watch the screen, and then make their decision.

From the above, we can easily see that TV advertising is beneficial both to manufacturers and consumers on account of the abundant information it proved.

三、问题解决型

黄金模板1(适合The Best Way题型)

Nowadays, it is a heatedly discussed topic that 引出话题(转述问题) . People have put forward various ways, such as 例1, 例2, 例3 , etc. As for me, the best way to 主题词 is 论点 . The benefits for my ideas can be generalized into two major ones. First of all, 支持论点的理由1. Suppose if 提出假象例子证明理由1. Another benefit is that 支持论点的理由2. 引用名言或谚语证明理由2. In conclusion, 总结. So 提出建议 .

(02年真题) The Best Way to Stay Healthy

Nowadays, it is a heatedly discussed topic that what is the best way to stay healthy. People have put forward various ways, such as doing exercises, taking vitamin tablets every day, etc. As for me, the best way to stay healthy is to develop a positive mind toward life.

The benefits for my ideas can be generalized into two major ones. First of all, a positive mind helps to release from the pressure or frustration of your work or life. Suppose if you always keep a bulldog mood toward everything, you cannot be healthy even if you have a very good diet and exercise very often.

Another benefit is that the positive attitude helps you to gain friendship. “ There is no man that impart his joys to his friends, but that he joy the more.” , as Bacon said. No one would like to make friend with one who always complains.

In conclusion, mental health is as important as physical health, but more difficult to gain. So once you are under pressure, you should learn how to relax and release your tensed nerves. And don’t forget to share it with your friends!

黄金模板2(My Idea型)

Some people take it for granted that 反方论点. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. From my point of view, 论点.

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First of all, 支持论点的理由1. 证明理由1. Besides, 支持论点的理由2. 证明理由2. From what has been discussed above, a conclusion can be draw that 总结观点. I wish 提出希望.

(05年真题) My Idea of a University Arts Festival

Some people take it for granted that the university arts festival is just a series of singing or dancing performance of students. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. From my point of view, a good university arts festival should be a feast of arts.

First of all, a good university arts festival should be a chance for students to get in touch with real arts. Pure arts, most of the time, seem to be far away from students’ reach. Our school should make a full use of this chance to cultivated students’ taste toward pure arts, such as classical music, master paintings, good books, etc.

Besides, the university arts festival should also serve as an effective compensation form extracurricular activities. We should ensure that this is an activity that all students have chances to participate in. In this way, the campus life can be greatly enriched and the festival can be really enjoyed by everybody.

From what has been discussed above, a conclusion can be drawn that a good university arts festival should be a big course of arts education and an activity of every student. I wish the arts festival next semester be carefully designed and arranged so that it will cater for different interests.

四、道理论证型(给定观点型)

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Nowadays, with 现象, people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of. In my point of view, 把标题变成陈述句 . There are numerous reasons to support my point of view, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. One of the primary causes is that 支持论点的理由1 . As the saying goes, 引用名言证明理由1. Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持论点的理由2. 阐释理由2. Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that 重述标题观点(论点) . Therefore, 提出意见或建议.

(03年真题) The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood

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Nowadays, with the surging cases of mental problem, committing suicide, or killing reported, people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of keeping a good mood. In my point of view, it is really important to keep an optimistic attitude toward pressure. There are numerous reasons to support my point of view, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.

One of the primary causes is that keeping a good mood helps you get along well with others. Nobody would like to make friends with one who always complains. As the saying goes, “A bad workman always blames his tools.”

Another reasion that can be seen by every person is that good mood benefits your health. Life is always full of ups and downs. When you are in trouble or frustration, you should take it in a reasonable way and overcome it as soon as possible.

Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that keeping a good mood brings you not only friendship, but health as well. Therefore, we should learn to look at things from a positive angle, face challenge and pressure with optimistic attitude.

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Upon the benefit (importance, significance) of 题中关键词, people share a common view that 论点. As to me, I can’t agree more with them. 题中关键词should, undoubtedly, be an indispensable part of our life. On the one hand, 支持论点的理由1. 阐述理由1. On the other hand, 支持论点的理由2阐述理由2. Finally, 支持论点的理由3. 阐述理由3. So, based no the above discussion, there is no doubt that 综述支持论点理由1,2,3. What worths mentioning is that 强调或引申论点.

(01年真题) Travel Broadens the Mind

Upon the benefit of travel, people share a common view that it relaxes our body and broadens our mind. As to me, I can’t agree more with them. Travel should, undoubtedly, be and dispensable part of our life.

One the one hand, travel enables us to know more about the geography and history of the outside world. Such knowledge often arouses our love of the world and makes us less narrow-minded.

On the other hand, travel helps to understand people of different culture and interests. We can get ideas of the living conditions and customs of other people. We can also taste different foods and local flavors.

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Finally, by travelling we can see with our own eyes many places read from books. We can visit the famous cities and scenic spots. We can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places. We can gain much beyond written in the books.

So, based on the above discusison, there is no doubt that travel is beneficial to our minds with the knowledge of geography, history, people and culture. What worths mentioning is that the knowledge we gain from travelling is definitely much beyond that we gain from book reading.

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Now, there is a growing awareness among our student that 引出话题. From my point of view, I think that 论点. I will explain why this is the case. The first and the most important reason is that 支持论点的理由1. If you look around, you will always find that 举例证明1. Another reason to support my idea is that 支持论点的理由2. A good case in point is 举例证明2. As the saying goes, 引用谚语. So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that 重述标题观点(论点). Students should 提出建议或意见. If we can manage to 以及改良办法, our life will be more enjoyable.

(00年真题) The Importance of Extracurricular Activities

Now, there is a growing awareness among our student that college life should be varied and colorful. From my point of view, I think that extracurricular activities make up an important part of our college life. I will explain why this is the case.

The first and the most important reason is that extracurricular activities are indispensable for us to build our bodies. If you look around, you will always find that those who never or seldom do physical exercises are more inclined to suffer this or that kind of frustrations or mental problems.

Another reason to support my idea is that extracurricular activities help us develop teamwork spirit. A good case in point is when playing volleyball, the team members must help and cooperate with each other in order to gain scores. As the proverbs says: By uniting we stand, by dividing we fall.

So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that extracurricular activities are helpful and necessary to college students. Students should not spend the whole day on academic study. If we can manage to strke a good balance between academic study and outside-class activities, our college life will be more enjoyable.

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测试题写作参考范文:

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My Opinion of “Human Flesh Search”

As Internet becomes an essential part of our life, “human flesh search” gains popularity in recent years. Some people regard it as an effective means to curb social evils, while others question its legality. In my opion, human flesh search should not be encouraged.

We have to admit that human flesh search has played a crucial role in exposing scandals such as the faked South China tiger photos. It helps to clarify facts and speed up the legal process of some cases. This method is especially effective in the cases where the wrongdoers can not be appropriately punished by law. By trapping the villain in a net of mass criticism, human flesh search gives the wrongdoer the moral punishment which is his due.

However, human flesh search, more often than not, goes too far. First, it is a violation of citizens’ privacy. Not only the information of the wrongdoers such as name, address, phone number si revealed on the net, but also the information of their family members, relatives or even colleagues is disclosed to the public. Moreover, indignant netizens, driven by their moral justices, often resort to humiliation, threat or violence, which seriously disturbs the targets’ normal life and imposes great psychological torment on them. It is reported that the mother of a wrongdoer was put into hospital as a result of netizens’ endless verbal humiliation. Besides, netizens sometimes mistakenly assaults an innocent person, taking him or her as the target they are searching for. In that case, the wronged person is tortured more severely.

Human flesh search is a double-edged sword. Used properly, it will help us to fight against social evils. Used improperly, it will lead to many negative consequences. In a word, human flesh search should be regulated and more complete internet laws are needed.

Dec. 20th

Dear Mr. Hood,

Christmas is coming and the English department is going to hold a party on Christmas eve. The party will be held on 7 p.m. in the students’ center. We are glad to invite you to join us for the celebration. It will be especially appreciated if you’d like to take part in singing the Christmas Carol. Yours, Wang Lin

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(二)

An Electronic Dictionary or a Traditional Paper One?

Dictionaries play a very important role in language study. When it comes to whether to choose an electronic dictionary or a traditional one, different people will offer different opinions. Though electronic dictionaries are more popular now and often quicker and easier to use, traditional paper dictionaries are the better tool for study, especially for a foreign language.

Traditional dictionaries, by providing more detailed definitions and examples, have greater capacity of vocabulary and better serve for study purposes. Some famous publishing house have issued a lot of authoritative dictionaries, like Oxford and Webster. People can choose any paper format from many different publishers as a study tool while there are frequently many errors in electronic ones. In addition, electronic dictionaries do not neessarily provide enough detail to provide accurate information.

Though paper dictionaries are generally much heavier than electronic ones, students can use them at any time and in any place because they do not rely on electricity. Though the size of the letters in some dictionaries is very small, it does not consume energy unless some count the energy a person uses to carry it around! Think of all the money people could save on batteries, too!

When people travel, an electronic dictionary may be more convenient. However, if somebody wants to read a book in a foreign language, a traditional dictionary is the perfect tool. Paper dictionaries are not merely a tool to check the meaning of words, but also a book which can be used to increase your vocabulary.

May 10

Dear Mr. Maxim,

I take great pleasure in sending my most ardent and earnest congratulations on your promotion to professor at the university! You are absolutely worthy of this new professional title since your lectures are always academically interesting and easy to understand. May best wishes for your continued success! Yours, John (三)

Learning is Mainly from Experience There has been much talk about whether we should learn from books or learn from experience. Some people think that learning from experience is more important while others hold the different opinion. Personally, I side with the former, in the belief that experience is the best teacher.

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Admittedly, learning from books, as advocated by many, has its active role to play in our academic life. It can put us in touch with the great minds and arm our heads with massive knowledge.

However, there are numerous merits for learning from experience, too. First things first, experience is the source of knowledge and understanding as well as meaning. Nowhere can the importance of learning from experience be described so vividly and accurately as in the old saying---“Nothing ever becomes real till it is experienced”. Take the human progress as an illustration. Dating back to hundreds of thousands years ago, we human beings were utterly ignorant. But by incessant practices, our ancestors accumulated massive experience, from which they acquired a great amount of knowledge, transforming our world from a primitive society into a highly-developed one. Second, unlike the theories recorded in books, experience can apply to a practical use. When we are at work, what we need is the experience of practical application instead of the abstract theories in our books.

Taking all these information into account, we can draw a conclusion that learning from experience is more important than learning from books. Always remember the old saying given by Einstein ---“The only source of knowledge is experience”.

Jun. 8, 2008 Dear George,

I have got a ticket to a computer fair, but I am unable to go there because I have an important date on that day. Since you are also a computer fan, I enclose this ticket to you. You can get to the fair by taking the No.6 bus. Wish you a good day there!

Yours, Paul (四)

The Best Way of Reducing Stress Stress is one of the biggest enemies for a modern person. Different people have different ways to beat stress, and my remedies depend on the type of pressure I have. Ususually the most common stresses I encounter are related to work, friend and myself.

The way I deal with work-related stress is to stop working for a while. If I find myself getting tired of the work, I would stop and talk to my colleagues for a while. And then I will get back to work again with enthusiasm. And when I encounter stress brought by my friends, I often talk about the problem with them openly and work out a solution together in an honest way. Through this way, I can mostly be understood by my friends and our relationship will probably turn out to be better than before. The last type of stress is acutally caused by myself. If I feel exhausted and anxious about

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my future, I would adjust myself and tell myself that I can do my best. Sometimes, I would ask for advice from my friends. And often, their encouragement helps me re-establish confidence and support me to go further.

Conclusively, my ways of reducing stress are avoiding, talking and facing it. It’s with these methods that I maintain physical and spiritural health and guarantee good relationships with others.

May 10 Dear Philip,

I went to Xinhua Bookstore the other day and happened to find the book about ancient Indian culture that you have long wanted to have. The bookstore is in East Street, not far from the second crossing. The book is on the second row on No.8 shelf.

Yours, Babara

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Let’s have a part-time job According to a recent survey, 55% of students in major cities think working part-time is beneficial while the rest consider it a waste of time. In my opion, part time jobs cannot only help us reduce our parents’ financial burden, but also offers us an opportunity to improve our time-management capacity, more importantly it prepares us for future job hunting.

First of all, we can manage to support ourselves through working part-time, be it tutoring or other public services industries which college students can have easy access to. We can learn to be independent and understand the hardship our parents have undergone to give us a better life. Second, there is no denying that doing part-time jobs will take us some time and presumably our study hours will have to be reduced. But it on the other hand requires us to improve our effeciency. Last but not least important, the experience of working part-time enables us to practice what we have learned in the textbooks and gain a better understanding of it.

In a word, having a part-time job while studying is beneficial to our school life and future career.therefore, university students should embrace the opportunities and improve themselves.

Sep. 5

Dear Prof. Johnson,

I’d like to discuss my graduate essay with you in your office, but you are so engaged. I wonder if you have time at 3 p.m. If it is possible, I can wait in your office. If not, please ring me to make another appointment. I have revised the essay

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according to the suggestions given to me last time. This time I want to have more improvements on words. Thank you.

Yours, Alex

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