树人中学2017学年第二学期高一英语写作练习(1)
使用班级：高一全段 编制人：李小琴 份数：380 日期：2018.3.13
姓名：______________ 班级：_______________
一，应用文之---建议信写作积累：
（1）交友和沟通类问题（老师写给学生长辈对晚辈）的建议信 ：翻译下文
_______________,(亲爱的晓东）
首段：_____________________________________________________________
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我很难过你在交友上有问题，然而，这种情况很容易改变如果你听取我的建议。以下是些建议帮助你。
正文(过渡句默写）：___________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
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首先，为什么不... 如果这样做，...第二， 你应该... 那样的话...第三，这会是一个好主意如果..., 通过做...
尾段：
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我希望你会发现这些想法有用。
_____________(你的老师）
______________(王老师）
拓展练习：（外国朋友交友）赏析并完成语法填空：
Dear Jack，
I know it was the first time that you____________(come) to China. When _______(talk) to others, you felt nervous. You found_____ difficult to get along well with others, because some are selfish. Here are some tips to help you.
In the____(one ) place, when your friends are upset, you’d better calm them ______ and try to help them solve the problems. Besides, you should
be__________(concern ) about your friends rather_______ ignore them. __ addition, when your friends disagree______ you, it would be good____ you could
communicate with them face to face. Finally, when they help you, you should be
grateful _______ them.
I would be more than _____(honour) if you take my advice into ________(consider).
Yours， Li Hua
（2）语言和学习类的建议（熟悉朋友同辈类的电子邮件）（翻译和填空）：
______________，(亲爱的王梅）
首段：_____________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
我很开心受到你的电子邮件。现在我写信给你一些建议关于如何在高中学好英语。
正文：First _____ all, you should... As______________(know) to all, vocabulary
is of great__________(important). _It would be ____good idea if ...What’s _________(many ) ,try to ...____________________________________________.
(只有用这样的方式，你才能提高你的口语） Last but not least, you’d better develop the habit of __________(keep ) a diary, ________ helps improve your _________(write) English.
尾段：_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
随着时间的流逝，你的英语将会变好如果你能做到以上。我真的希望我的建议有用。总之，有志者事竟成！祝福你。 _____________________你真诚的朋友，
Li Hua
（3）旅游和景点建议类（写给外国朋友旅游景点的建议信）：2017 温州一模
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know you and your family__________(come) to Wenzhou for the summer holiday. About attractions here, I believe Yongjia is an ideal destination.
With fascinating scenery of mountains and rivers, it is a typical county __________dozens of ancient villages lie. You can not only appreciate the fantastic landscapes_______ enjoy the unique local customs and delicious food.______(sure) the trip will leave you ______ unforgettable memory.
Looking forward to your ___________(arrive) soon!
Zhang Wen
（4）健康，生活，减压和运动之类的建议信(朋友之间）
Dear Wu Dong,
I feel sorry to hear that you became too tired working for the exams.As your friend, here are some suggestions for you ________(concern) it.
As you know, health is the most important. Whatever ______(goal) you want to achieve, you must firstly pay attention _____ your body.As____result, I would suggest that you_______(turn) to a doctor and ask for some advice. Though there is endless work we have to do for the exams, the best _______(solve) to balance health and scores in the exams is to make yourself a schedule on _______ you have time for sports or________(hang) out with friends. Or else, maybe you can study with your classmates and friends. In that way, you can communicate with each other_______
(help) with the questions and make the exams easier_________(compare) studying by yourself.
______________________________________________(真心祝愿你能很快恢复）
Yours
Li Hua
（5）环境保护和校园建设，动物保护，文物，文化风俗保护等的倡议信(组织写给个人）
①Dear classmates,
Since our environment has been polluted_______(terrible) ,it’s high time______ we took actions to change the bad condition. As we are senior students, we must hold the belief that it is our duty_________(preserve) our beautiful home from_____________(ruin )by the serious pollution .
In order to protect the environment ,we are planning to organize an activity next Saturday _____ is to make people appreciate the significance(importance) of the ____________(environment) protection .As we all know ,the more members we have ,the _____________(impressive) our activity will be .If you have enough
_________________(责任感） and are also interested in our activity, don’t hesitate to go to the Students’ Union to finish an __________(apply) form. You should never miss it!
____________________________________________(期待你的参与participation)
Students’Union
② 校园建设建议信：（学生写给校长）
Dear Mr. President,
It’s come to my attention that our school is going to build a new sports center.
__________________________________________________________________
(翻译：我写信请你考虑下面的建议.
First, I’d like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court. I think it would_______ great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students ____ are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton. Additionally, could the center open in our spare time? If so, we will have enough time to make full use____ it. Last ____ all, we will be more_____ happy if the center is free. As we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense.
Thank you for reading my letter._______________________________________（我将非常感激如果你能考虑我的建议）.Looking forward to it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二，全篇建议信写作训练（动物保护，个人对组织）
假定你是李华，家乡在温州，你对野生濒危动物保护非常感兴趣，并在互联网上查询到濒危鸟类朱鹮（Crested ibis）曾在浙江出现后但消失。2008年后从陕西引进并进行人工圈养，并成功在2014年放飞33只到野外并绝大部分存活。请根据本单元所学词汇和建议信模板，给野生动物保护基金协会在浙江的办事机构写封建议信，提出2-3条建议。
注意：词数 80词左右，建议信的格式和三段布局
参考词汇：decrease, in danger of,extinction/dying out, natural reserve, take steps, punish ,make laws, raise people’s awareness(意识）pay attention to ,appreciate, be of importance, set up ，protect...from
参考句型:我写信表达关于如何...观点：I am writing to express my view on how to ...
首先 To begin with , 其次，In addition to 最后，Last but not least
总之：To sum up ,...
据说：it is said that ... 如果 if..... , 在我看来 As far as I am concerned
正在被：be being done , 有必要/很重要去做：It is necessary /vital to do ...
毫无疑问：There is no doubt that ...做某事是急迫的 doing sth is urgent.
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三，阅读理解
Are you shy? If you are, you are not alone. In fact, close to 50 percent of people are shy. Almost 80 percent of people feel shy at some point in their lives. These days, shyness is becoming more and more common. Now, scientists are trying to understand shyness. They have some interesting ideas about why people are shy.
Is it possible to be born shy? Many scientists say yes. They say 15 to 20 percent of babies behave shyly. These babies are a little quieter and more watchful than other babies. Interestingly, these shy babies usually have shy parents. As a result, scientists think that some shyness is genetic. Family size might cause people to be shy as well. Scientists at Harvard University studied shy children. They found that 66 percent of them had older brothers and sisters. As a result, they became shy. At the same time, children with no brothers and sisters may be shy as well. Growing up alone, they often play by themselves. They are not able to learn the same social skills as children from big families.
You may also be shy because of where you were born. When scientists studied shyness in different countries. They found surprising differences. In Japan, most people said they were shy. But in Israel, only one of three people said so. What explains the difference? One scientist says the Japanese and Israelis have different opinions of failure. In Japan, when people do not succeed, they feel bad about themselves. They blame（责备）themselves for their failure. In Israel, the opposite is true. Israelis often blame failure on outside reasons, such as family, teachers, friends, or bad luck. In Israel, freedom of opinion and risk taking are strongly supported. This may be why Israelis worry less about failure and are less shy.
For shy people, it can be difficult to make friends, speak in class, and even get a good job. But scientists say you can get over your shyness. They suggest trying new things and practicing conversation. And don’t forget---if you are shy, you are not the only one.
( )1. What is the passage mainly about?
A. Happiness. B. Shyness.
C. Kindness. D. loneliness.
( )2. What does the underlined word “genetic”in paragraph 2 probably mean?
A. Passed down from parents. B. Learned from friends.
C. Taught by teachers. D. Made up by brothers.
( )3.We can learn from the passage that _______ may cause shyness.
A. genetics, grown--ups and birthplace
B. genetics, family size and birthplace
C. family size, grown--ups and failure
D. genetics, family size and freedom
( )4.Scientists suggest that shy people can get over their shyness by______.
A. blaming their failure on outside reasons
B. trying new things and practicing conversation
C. getting themselves away from their shy parents
D. trying to understand reasons for their shyness
( )5.Which of the following shows the structure（结构）of the passage?
(P=Paragraph)
四，写作
请根据以上以上问题的答案，了解本篇文章的主旨，以及段落大意和内容，概括出4-5个要点，完成60词的文章概要。注意：1，适当使用句子间的逻辑关系连接词 2，标注总词数
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Class:_____________ Name:________________ Marks：_____________ Date___________
概要写作要求评分考虑四个方面：
（1）原文要点理解并呈现（2）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。（3）上下文的连贯性4，各要点表达的独立情况 （2）注意1，词数少于40词的和多于80词，从总分减2分）2，书写较差，涂改较多，将一档次，减去5分3，标点符号和单词拼写也是语言准确性的一个重要
第高档作文：理解准确，涵盖全部要点(3-5个），语法词汇准确，有效地语句连接，
完全使用自己的语言
c参考答案：
一，作文
Dear Xiao Dong_____________,(亲爱的晓东）
首段：_I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends .However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
我很难过你在交友上有问题，然而，这种情况很容易改变如果你听取我的建议。以下是些建议帮助你。
正文(过渡句默写）：First, why not ..? If you do this, ... Secondly , you should,... That way,... Thirdly,. it would be a good idea if... By doing this, ...
首先，为什么不... 如果这样做，...第二， 你应该... 那样的话...第三，这会是一个好主意如果..., 通过做...
尾段：I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你会发现这些想法有用。
_Yours_____(你的老师）
__Miss Wang
拓展练习：（外国朋友交友）赏析并完成语法填空：
Dear Jack，
I know it was the first time that you__had come___________(come) to China. When _talking_______(talk) to others, you felt nervous. You found___it__ difficult to get along well with others, because some are selfish. Here are some tips to help you.
In the _first____(one ) place, when your friends are upset, you’d better calm them __down_____ and try to help them solve the problems. Besides, you should be__concerned________(concern ) about your friends rather_____than__ ignore them. ___In__ addition, when your friends disagree___with_____ you, it would be good_if_____ you could communicate with them face to face. Finally, when they help you, you should be grateful __to______ them.
I would be more than _honored_____(honour) if you take my advice into _consideration________(consider).
Yours， Li Hua
（2）语言和学习类的建议（熟悉朋友同辈类的电子邮件）（翻译和填空）：
Dear Wangmei ，(亲爱的王梅）
首段：I am glad to receive your e-mail. I am writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in senior school.
我很开心受到你的电子邮件。现在我写信给你一些建议关于如何在高中学好英语。
正文：First of all, you should... As is known (know) to all, vocabulary
is of great importance (important). _It would be a good idea if ...What’s more (many ) ,try to ...Only in this way,can you improve your spoken English._.
(只有用这样的方式，你才能提高你的口语） Last but not least, you’d better develop the habit of keeping (keep ) a diary, _____which ___ helps improve your _________(write) English.
尾段：With time going by, your English will be better if you can do the above. I sincerely hope my advice will be useful. In a word, where there is a will, there is a way Best wishes!
随着时间的流逝，你的英语将会变好如果你能做到以上。我真的希望我的建议有用。总之，有志者事竟成！祝福你。 _Yours_______你真诚的朋友，
Li Hua
（6）旅游和景点建议类（写给外国朋友旅游景点的建议信）：2017 温州一模
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know you and your family__are Wenzhou
for
the
summer
holiday.
coming About
________(come) to attractions
here,
I believe Yongjia is an ideal destination.
With fascinating scenery of mountains and rivers, it is a typical county __where ________dozens of ancient villages lie. You can not only appreciate the fantastic landscapes__but _____ enjoy the unique local customs and delicious food.___Surely___(sure) the trip will leave you _an ____ unforgettable memory.
Looking forward to your __arrival_________(arrive) soon!
Zhang Wen
（7）健康，生活，减压和运动之类的建议信(朋友之间）
Dear Wu Dong,
I feel sorry to hear that you became too tired working for the exams.As your friend, here are some suggestions for you _concerning_______(concern) it.
As you know, health is the most important. Whatever __goals____(goal) you want to achieve, you must firstly pay attention __to___ your body.As__a__result, I would suggest that you___turn____(turn) to a doctor and ask for some advice. Though there is endless work we have to do for the exams, the best ___solution____(solve) to balance health and scores in the exams is to make yourself a schedule on _which______ you have time for sports
or___hanging_____(hang) out with friends. Or else, maybe you can study with your classmates and friends. In that way, you can communicate with each other___to help ____
(help) with the questions and make the exams easier_____compared____(compare) studying by yourself.
I hope with my heart that you will recover soon!(真心祝愿你能很快恢复）
Yours
Li Hua
（8）环境保护和校园建设，动物保护，文物，文化风俗保护等的倡议信(组织写给个人）
①Dear classmates,
Since our environment has been polluted____terribly___(terrible) ,it’s high time___that___ we took actions to change the bad condition. As we are senior students, we must hold the belief that it is our duty__to preserve_______(preserve) our beautiful home from_being ruined____________(ruin )by the serious pollution .
In order to protect the environment ,we are planning to organize an activity next Saturday ___which__ is to make people appreciate the
significance(importance) of the ____environmental________(environment)
protection .As we all know ,the more members we have ,the ______more impressive _______(impressive) our activity will be .If you have enough
responsibility_________________(责任感） and are also interested in our activity, don’t hesitate to go to the Students’ Union to finish an __application________(apply) form. You should never miss it!
Looking forward to your participation._(期待你的参与participation)
Students’Union
② 校园建设建议信：（学生写给校长）
Dear Mr. President,
It’s come to my attention that our school is going to build a new sports
center.
I am writing to ask you consider my following suggestions.
(翻译：我写信请你考虑下面的建议.
First, I’d like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court. I think it would___do____ great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students _who___ are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton. Additionally, could the center open in our spare time? If so, we will have enough time to make full use____ it. Last __of __ all, we will be more__than___ happy if the center is free. As we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense.
Thank you for reading my letter.I would be appreciate it if you can take my advice into consideration.（我将非常感激如果你能考虑我的建议）.Looking forward to it.
Yours sincerely,
参考答案：BABBA
概要写作参考范文：Shyness is common among people and different reasons can explain it . (要点一）Some people are born shy because they have shy parents. (要点二） Family size is another reason explaining why some kids behave shyly. (要
点三） Besides， the culture where one is raised may play a part in one’s shyness. (要点四） However, one can get over shyness by trying new things and communicating with others. (要点五）
应用文答案参考世纪金榜51页作文答案(下文可以适当删减）
Dear WWF,
I am writing to express my opinion on how to protect the endangered species called Crested ibis in our hometown-ZheJiang .
As you know, the birds are rare and it’s said that they once died out here but luckily some have been brought in and the number is increasing slowly in the wild. If attention is not paid to again , they will be in danger of extinction again. As a result, I’d like to share my suggestions. First, laws should be made to protect them and to punish those who hunt them illegally. Only in this way, can they be safe. Besides, It is necessary to set up more natural reserves . There is no doubt that the more they live in the wild , the more chances they will have to survive. Last but not least, people have got to be educated to raise their awareness of wild life protection .
To sum up, it is vital for us to take steps to protect the Crested ibis .I am certain that they will live happily with your help.
Y ours
LiHua
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