假定你是校学生会主席李华, 你校将于下周开展以\"Labor is the Most Beautiful\"为主题的劳动周活动,请你以学生会的名义发起倡议,内容包括:1. 学生目前对劳动的态度;2. 劳动的意义;3. 呼吁参加。 思路 命题分析:
紧紧围绕考试热点和思维品质,将生活融入考试内容,让学生有话可讲、有情可抒,有感可发。 三段结构
首段:对劳动的态度(主要需指出不重视)
中段:劳动的意义(三点左右劳动的好处,段首可以使用总起句) 尾段:呼吁(注意呼吁语气的表达) 注意句式丰富与词汇升级 写作难点:
注意审题逻辑,本篇文章中“学生目前对劳动的态度”应该是消极负面的,才好在文章的核心讲劳动的意义,以及才会有学校办这次活动的目的。 另外,劳动的意义是这篇文章的重点,大家可以多积累相关的话题表达。同时,文章给出的活动主题是“劳动最美”,写作时最好可以呼应活动主题,点到劳动之美。 英文示例
Dear fellow students,
Currently, the majority of students just prioritize(v:优先考虑;将...
作为首要任务) academic study while fail to recognize the significance of labor, perceiving(认为,可升级think) labor as a waste of time.
However, what we would be rewarded through labor is absolutely
beyond our imagination. Not only can we achieve what we need and grasp practical skills through labor, but also it plays a vital role
in cultivating responsibility and cooperation awareness.(以“不仅...而且...”表达作用意义时,记得使用倒装句。) What’s more, our sense of value and achievement would also be tremendously fostered(培养) in the process.
Therefore, I appeal to everyone to engage in more labor when available and embrace a promising future.
The Student Union
下水文: Dear classmates,
currently, labor education is receiving increasing attention, but some students are buried in their studies and believe that labor is a waste of time. However, this is necessary.
In fact, the time spent on labor is rewarded. It can exercise our practical skills, strong willpower, and unity and cooperation. At the same time, we will also have valuable opportunities to contribute our strength and gain spiritual satisfaction.
Therefore, actively participate in labor and assume our obligations at home and school. It has been proven that this will be very beneficial and necessary.
student
union 参考范文
Dear fellow students,
Currently, labor education has been increasingly attached great importance to, but some students just bury themselves in books, believing that labor is a waste of time. However, it is necessary for us to do it.
Actually, time spent laboring is rewarding. It can promote our practical skills, strong will, unity and cooperation. Meanwhile, we will also be given the precious chances to contribute our share and rewarded with a spiritual fulfillment.
Therefore, actively engage in labor and take our obligation both at home and at school. It will turn out to be very beneficial and essential. (96 words) The Student Union 同话题巩固练习:
(2023年湖北省七市(州)高三年级3月联合统一调研测试)假定你校的英文校报将发行以“劳动课”为专题的一期报纸,请你写一篇稿件投稿,内容包括:1.介绍你最喜欢的劳动课内容(如做清洁、种植和修理等);2.劳动课的意义。
注意:1.写作词数80左右:2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯:3.开头已给出,不计入总词数,请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段表述劳动课的意义(要点2);第二段介绍我最喜欢的劳动课(要点2)及理由;第三段总结。 下水作文原创版
Labor class, part of our school courses, is required in primary and middle schools every week. The process of our growing up, as is known to all, requires learning ability, but acquiring life skills is also a must, which can be achieved by labor education.
Our school has various labor classes, ranging from cooking to planting, among which I have a preference for appliance repair. Learning to repair simple household appliances will not only enhance my independence, but also help me say no to giving up when I meet difficulties.
I’m firmly convinced that only through honest labor can I achieve the world's beautiful dream, and only through honest labor can I create all the brilliance of my life. (103 words) 本文的亮点:
(1)as is known to all用作插入语,意为“众所周知”;
(2)must此处活用作动词,相当于necessary、essential的意思; (3)ranging from ... to ...从...到...(形容范围广); (4)have a preference for偏爱,更喜欢; (5)say no to拒绝;
(6)be firmly convinced that深信,后接宾语从句;
(7)only through honest labor can I结构中,only+介宾短语置于句首产生部分倒装结构。
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