解析2016全国卷高考英语作文

解析2016全国卷高考英语作文（甲/乙/丙）

高考英语全国甲卷即新课标全国I卷，考察省市包括河南、河北、山西、江西、湖南、湖北、广东、安徽、福建、山东等省。全国乙卷即新课标全国II卷，考察省市包括青海，西藏，甘肃，吉林，宁夏，内蒙，黑龙江，新疆，重庆，海南，辽宁。全国丙卷是今年第一次命题，覆盖范围包括云南、广西、贵州等省。

【全国甲卷】

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请他帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：

1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【李辉范文】

Dear Ms Jenkins,

How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. Recently, I plan to apply for a part time job in a foreign company in the coming summer vacation. So, I have written my application letter and my resume and I am writing to turn to you for help.

For one thing, would you be so kind as to tell me if my application letter has been written in the correct format? For another, I would appreciate it if you could help me improve my vocabulary and grammar used in my application letter, which is of great significance to me.

Hopefully, you could do me the favor and help me win this precious chance. Thank you so much. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua

【命题点评】

这道题目属于求助信，和2011年山东卷、2011年新课标I卷、2013新课标I卷高考英语作文题目相似。（注意不要写成申请信）

【全国乙卷】

假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学生摄影展，请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：

1. 主题：环境保护；

2. 展览时间；

3. 投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，意识行文连贯。

【李辉范文】

Dear Peter,

How are you doing? Recently, an exhibition for middle school photographers will be held by the photography club in our school. I learned in your Twitter that you are crazy about this hobby. So, I, on behalf of our club, am writing to invite you to share some of your master pieces for this show.

Here are some details and requirement. To begin with, the theme of the exhibition is Environmental Protection, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, the date of the activity is June, 17th ; as a result, you’d better hand in your photos as soon as possible.

By the way, our email address is intlphotoshow@gmschool. Hopefully, you would take part in this exhibition and win a lot of fans! Please let me know your decision soon. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua

【命题点评】

这篇带有邀请信、告知信、求助信等元素，和2010全国卷I，2015全国卷I，2015全国卷2相似。

【全国丙卷】

假如你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约，请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1、表示道歉；

2、说明原因；

3、另约时间。

注意：

1、词数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

【李辉范文】

Dear Bob,

How are you doing? We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday. Unfortunately, I can’t make it. So, I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.

How I wish I could go with you! However, I am chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition with an America high school, which, you know, is of great importance to me, for I have always been dreaming to have a chance like this to improve my spoken English. As a result, I have no choice but to say sorry to you.

How about going to the book shop this Sunday? Then both of us will be available and I can share my experience of the competition with you. Please. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua

【命题点评】

这篇文章属于道歉信，命题风格和内容均和2010山东卷高考英语类似。