第一节（15分） 一、评分原则：
1．本题总分15分，按4个档次给分。
2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以档次的要求来衡量，确定或降低档次，最后给分。
3．评分时应考虑：内容是否完整，条理是否清楚，交际是否得体，语言是否准确。
4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可以接受。5．词数少于50，从总分中减去1分。 二、各档次的给分范围和要求： 分值 第一档 (13分--15分) 第二档 （9分--12分） 评分标准说明 完全完成了试题规定的任务。内容完整，条理清楚； 交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求；体现出较强的语言运用能力。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求； 所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求；语法和用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。 基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档 （4分--8分） 第四档 （1分--3分） 0 未能传达任何信息；写的内容与要求无关。 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。内容不完整； 所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。 未能清楚地传达信息。 未完成试题规定的任务。写了少量相关信息； 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。
【写作步骤】
注意：书信的实用性，简单 ，易懂！
一． 审题目，划重点，重要内容不能丢。 二． 列提纲，分段落：
开头段：（问候或自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的）
中间段：（主题句+解释句） （注意使用关联词）
结尾段：（补充说明+客套话）我希望…我相信…请回信。 三. 定稿、誊抄 四．检查。（写作要点、单词拼写，时态语态、句型句式等）
五． 漂亮的书写非常重要！漂亮的书写非常重要！漂亮的书写非常重要！
口诀：开门见山说意图，咨询建议一二三，不同内容可分段，希望感
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谢不能少，期待回信成俗套。 段落结构及内容：
一．开头段
①问候 How are you doing?/How is everything going with you? 自我介绍 I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union of ……. High School.
②写信背景：I am very delighted to know that you are curious about….
③ 写信目的： Therefore, I am writing a letter to recommend……. to you in detail.
二． 中间段：主题句+解释句
④介绍细节Here are some relevant information about this activity. ⑤活动主题To begin with,the theme of the activity will be 某某主题，which will be very meaningful.
⑥时间地点Besides, it will be in某某地点from几点几分 to 几点几分in the morning/afternoon/evening on 几月几号. ⑦补充细节Finally, 谁will take part in it, doing sth. 三． 结尾段（补充说明+客套话）
⑧希望相信Hopefully,you would make it to our activity./ I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
⑨有事来电If you have any other questions, please feel free to call me.
⑩回复期待Please send me an email to let me know your
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decision soon,/ I am looking forward to receiving your reply. 例题解析：
2018 朝阳高三期末试题
第一节 （15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班的交换生Jim对中华传统文化感兴趣，准备下学期选修一门相关课程，向你征询建议。请给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐一门选修课； 2. 说明推荐的理由； 3. 提出学习这门课程的建议。
注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
Dear Jim,
How is everything going with you? I am very delighted that you are curious about Chinese culture and eager to explore more. Therefore，I am writing to recommend a course to you.
I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice. As for the reasons, to begin with, by learning Chinese ancient poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China.Besides, you can feel the charm of the language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese. To follow the course well, you’d better read and recite as many poems as possible. In addition, it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.
What you do think of the course? I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it.If have any other questions, please feel free to ask me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
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Yours, Li Hua
Homework 2018 西城期末
第一节（15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华, 你的英国朋友George要来北京，其间他想参加中国传统文化方面的课程，来信希望你能推荐一个课程。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你推荐的课程； 2. 该课程的内容； 3. 你推荐的理由。
注意： 1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear George,
Yours, Li Hua
2019海淀一模：
第一节（15分）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他暑假将来北京参加“外国人唱中国歌大赛”，希望你为他推荐一首中文歌曲。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐曲目: 2. 推荐理由； 3. 你的祝愿。
注意: 1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
2018 西城期末
三、One possible version:
Dear George,
I am delighted to hear that you want to take a course about Chinese traditional culture. I am writing to recommend one on Beijing Opera.
This course, “Introduction to Beijing Opera”, which will be held in Beijing next month for two weeks, contains two sections. A lecture on the history of Beijing Opera will introduce its time-honored development, including the detailed process of how it spread. What takes the course to a new height is a theater trip. Stepping into Mei Lanfang Theatre, you’ll get a taste of the performance techniques by appreciating how
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the voices and motions are perfectly combined on the stage.
I heartily recommend this course to you based on the following reasons. I know you love drama so much, so you will be able to more easily understand Sheng, Dan, Jing, Mo, Chou, the five main characters of Beijing Opera. It is also an interactive course, in which you will have a chance to communicate with opera performers face to face.
I hope my introduction is helpful to you. Please let me know if you have further questions. Yours, Li Hua
One Possible Version Dear Jim,
How is it going? I’m so glad to hear you will come to Beijing and participate in the Chinese Singing Competition for Foreigners this summer vacation. For the song to choose, I highly recommend Moli Hua, Jasmine Flower, which is representative of Chinese folk music.
My recommendation is based on the following reasons. First of all, it enjoys wide popularity, so there’s no doubt it will attract the audience’s attention once you start to sing. Moreover, this song has beautiful melody and simple lyrics, which are relatively easy for you to learn in a short time. At the same time, the soothing tunes will make your learning process pleasant and comfortable. I bet you are bound to stand out among all the competitors.
I sincerely hope my recommendation can be helpful and wish you a wonderful performance. When you come to Beijing, remember to let me know, since I’d like to be there to cheer for you. Yours, Li Hua
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