我的姐妹（my lovely sister）
My younger sister,a jiao,is a girl of 7. The new school year begins, and she goes to school evry day. My a jiao like her lessons a lot and works hard at them.My mother always takes her to school in the morning, and brings her home in the afternoon.
When a jiao is at school, she listens to her teachers carefully and likes to answer her teachers’ questions.When class is over ,she goes out of the classroomto play games with her classmates.She is friendly to them.
When a jiao is at home,she does her homework first.After supper she helps mother clean the floor.Then she’ll watch TV for a short time if mother permits.
【文章点评】文章从在学校和在家这两个方面的表现对阿娇进行了介绍。而且用了不少学过的句型，比如work hard at ,take...to,be at school,listen to ,be friendly to ,do one’s homeword等。虽然文字不多，但表达清楚，思路清晰，值得一读
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